My name is Samara Soares Floriano, I´m 19 years old and I have been stydying Engish at FALE, it is my fourth semester.I am currently working as an intern at FALE as well, at the project ALADIM.And after I graduate I intend to do a Master's degree and a PhD in linguistics. In this course I hope to improve my academic writing and oral skills in presentations.
ANA CAROLINA - Sugestão
Samara, your biodata is good in general,it contains essential information clearly and precisely, but you should, for example, give more details about your internship at the project ALADIM: what you do there,if it is a research project...You should give more informations about your expectations in doing an exchange and professional life.
Bárbara's sugestion:
I agree with Ana Carolina. Your biodata will be more interesting if you put more informations about your work in Aladim, and if you talk more about doing the exchange.
2° VERSION:
My name is Samara Soares Floriano, I´m 19 years old and I have been studying English at FALE, it is my fourth semester.I am currently working as an intern at FALE as well, at the project ALADIM, at this project we research games available freeon line on the internet, to help children learn to write and read. And after I graduate I intend to do a Master's degree and a PhD in linguistics. I want to stydy abroad too, I want to go to Australia or New Zealand (these are amazing places that I wanto to know better). In this course I hope to improve my academic writing and oral skills in presentations and informal conversations.
Igor's suggestions:
Correct the words "Zeland", "Engish", "wanto" and "stydying".
ANA CAROLINA - Sugestão
Samara, your biodata is good in general,it contains essential information clearly and precisely, but you should, for example, give more details about your internship at the project ALADIM: what you do there,if it is a research project...You should give more informations about your expectations in doing an exchange and professional life.
Bárbara's sugestion:
I agree with Ana Carolina. Your biodata will be more interesting if you put more informations about your work in Aladim, and if you talk more about doing the exchange.
2° VERSION:
My name is Samara Soares Floriano, I´m 19 years old and I have been studying English at FALE, it is my fourth semester. I am currently working as an intern at FALE as well, at the project ALADIM, at this project we research games available free on line on the internet, to help children learn to write and read.
And after I graduate I intend to do a Master's degree and a PhD in linguistics. I want to stydy abroad too, I want to go to Australia or New Zealand (these are amazing places that I wanto to know better). In this course I hope to improve my academic writing and oral skills in presentations and informal conversations.
Igor's suggestions:
Correct the words "Zeland", "Engish", "wanto" and "stydying".